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I m sorry but the writing is awful and I don t understand how this has such high ratings RH books as a rule are always overrated, and I mean literally overrated, as in you should go in knowing they should be at least 0.3 stars lower and I know this but this one really shouldn t be anyway near 4 stars in my opinion.The writing goes like this My mother was speaking to two men They wanted me to go to some Academy Absolutely not They said I caused a strom I went to tell them off I was angry I m sorry but the writing is awful and I don t understand how this has such high ratings RH books as a rule are always overrated, and I mean literally overrated, as in you should go in knowing they should be at least 0.3 stars lower and I know this but this one really shouldn t be anyway near 4 stars in my opinion.The writing goes like this My mother was speaking to two men They wanted me to go to some Academy Absolutely not They said I caused a strom I went to tell them off I was angry My mother made them leave Suddenly a man appeared out of thin air How dare you come out of nowhere, where were you all my life Sweety I am your father, I am sorry I wasn t there all your life Obviously it s not exactly like this but close enough.I swear it s ridiculous There are way too many periods making the sentences extremely short and so that there s no fluidity at all, not to mention it jumps from one thing to another with no rhyme or reason Basically the writing is very, very jumbled and I m saying this as someone who doesn t write and I m no expert, I just read a lot, so if I m so bothered by it I feel like so would many other people.Then there s the fact Hayley doesn t react to things like a normal human being yes, she s not actually human but you know what I mean and it doesn t help that the author doesn t bother to describe her thought process in any detail, or really at all, or how she makes some questionable mental jumps to the conclusions she comes to.I m serious, her deduction skills are quite something she sees two men speaking to her mother and they want her to go to their Academy There is nothing in that situation or in the things they say that should detemine that they know her mother and yet she comes to that conclusion How you ask Well your guess is as good as mine but it s not the only time that happens, it s quite frequent and I think it s a case of the author making the MC having instant instinctual knowlegde of things she shouldn t know because the author forgets she doesn t have these informations A man appears out of nowhere and she somehow knows it s her father HOW She s not even surprised or bothered by the fact he just teleported there Nothing Really This is just the first 10 pages The rest is just as bad.There s the classic and dreaded exposition that turns into an info dump Also it seems adjectives and adverbs as a means of description are not a thing here, no he said regretfully or she explained with a proud smile or in a furious voice No, we get dialogues with no indication as to how these people talk or how they feel unless they say it outright.Ok I m done I didn t even finish it so I should stop ranting Moving on Ugh, now I ve turned into a punctuation monster too See what you ve done When Hayley is 18, she finds out that her mother is a witch, Lucifer is her father, and she has powers that have been bound She also learns that her ex boyfriend in a hell hound with an agenda, and her cat is actually a hellcat in the form of a boy she hates and her fated mate When she gets sent to Fortuna Conservatory, she meets a vampire and a warlock, both of whom are attracted to her Something that Lilith has placed in play is starting to happen, and Hayley has no idea how she is suppos When Hayley is 18, she finds out that her mother is a witch, Lucifer is her father, and she has powers that have been bound She also learns that her ex boyfriend in a hell hound with an agenda, and her cat is actually a hellcat in the form of a boy she hates and her fated mate When she gets sent to Fortuna Conservatory, she meets a vampire and a warlock, both of whom are attracted to her Something that Lilith has placed in play is starting to happen, and Hayley has no idea how she is supposed to be or which way to turn The hell hounds are after her and she needs to unlock all of her powers and figure out how to stay alive and win A bit of a cliff hanger ending when Keane gets poisoned he survives, but what happens next Lilith says Hayley has 5 mates who are the other two Looking forward toI received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review I m rating this a 3.5 but I didn t finish it, so take that with a grain of salt The 3.5 is because the concept behind this book is fantastic a premise that truly tickles me and made me want to read it in one sitting However the writing style left me cold It is dialogue driven with little description or explanation plus it is incredibly fast Our main character, Hayley, is spoiled and immature and frankly, pretty bratty She accepts the truth of her nature in a heartbeat, yet someh I m rating this a 3.5 but I didn t finish it, so take that with a grain of salt The 3.5 is because the concept behind this book is fantastic a premise that truly tickles me and made me want to read it in one sitting However the writing style left me cold It is dialogue driven with little description or explanation plus it is incredibly fast Our main character, Hayley, is spoiled and immature and frankly, pretty bratty She accepts the truth of her nature in a heartbeat, yet somehow can t accept that the guy she despises has been trying to protect her from herself for the last few years It boggles Perhaps I gave up too soon, at 24% Maybe this gets better and I was just suffering through the fluff of intro before the meat of the story caught up to the narrative Possibly But possibly not Regardless, I was saddened to stop as, like I said, I really like the premise But I just couldn t do it Did you like this book Tell me why, maybe I ll pick it back up again and try onceDoes it get better I was given this book for free in exchange for an honest review As I ve said before, I always give honest reviews whether people appreciate them or not This story begins with Hayley returning home from a date with Rhys We ll talk about him a little later When she enters the house her mom is with two men telling her that Hayley needs to go to some witch academy and not Harvard like she planned Yeah, telling an eighteen year old whose heart is set on going to Harvard that she suddenly can t m I was given this book for free in exchange for an honest review As I ve said before, I always give honest reviews whether people appreciate them or not This story begins with Hayley returning home from a date with Rhys We ll talk about him a little later When she enters the house her mom is with two men telling her that Hayley needs to go to some witch academy and not Harvard like she planned Yeah, telling an eighteen year old whose heart is set on going to Harvard that she suddenly can t means fireworks are about to go off Hayley s mom, Melinda, keeps telling the men no when Hayley breaks in Well, eventually the men leave when suddenly the father she didn t know she had pops in Her mom is a very powerful witch, but has been living as a human to protect Hayley Her father is, wait for it, Satan If you re old enough, you probably said that like the Church Lady from SNL It turns out that Melinda and Lucifer are the perfect fairy tale love story Unfortunately, they couldn t let it be known who Hayley s father was to keep her protected Lucifer doesn t have any other children, so he s an over protective daddy with his baby girl He had her Hellcat mate as her bodyguard her entire life Said Hellcat, Keane, had to pretend to be a housecat for years Then, when she was old enough to start getting into teenager type of trouble like smoking, drinking, drugs and sex Keane in his human form constantly interrupted her fun It turns out that Hayley, being the daughter of Satan, yes I like calling him that, and a powerful witch, is an ber powerfull Nephilim She just has no education about the non human side of life or how to use her powers She does decide to go to Fortuna Academy instead of Harvard Hayley really doesn t have a clue how to use magic, her hellfire or anything remotely otherworldly She rooms with Keane, who happens to be her fianc , gets tutored by a vampire named Kirnon and gets tutored in magic by warlock Azriel There is apparently also an ancient prophecy lost somewhere about her and she might be able to find it in the library The Academy has two Hellhound packs I guess One of them headed by Gaius and the other is sort of by Rhys Yeah, Rhys All the Hellhounds seem to be interested in Hayley and no one knows why Ms Trepagnier wrote one heck of a story here Everything at the Academy is intense and very edge of your seat I was afraid that the heading A Reverse Harem Romance would be a lie, especially since Hayley was only eighteen I m happy it was true There isn t any sex, at least not yet since it s only her first year, but there is eventually pretty intense like, and then love, between her and her three mates Since this is the first Fortuna Academy Book I am really excited to read the second one whenever it is released y next ADULT Harry Potter style series Yay my other one ended boo hoo I am intrigued by the parents of our heroine How will that combination work out.You are ready to off to the college of your drams, have your future planned out and BAM , your life changes in an instance Now add to that , you find out that you have magic and need to go to this school Every one has learned their magic while growing up Not you Add to that you can scent your mate but it isthan one That is no y next ADULT Harry Potter style series Yay my other one ended boo hoo I am intrigued by the parents of our heroine How will that combination work out.You are ready to off to the college of your drams, have your future planned out and BAM , your life changes in an instance Now add to that , you find out that you have magic and need to go to this school Every one has learned their magic while growing up Not you Add to that you can scent your mate but it isthan one That is not the usual way it happens I can see where that may go, but not able to quite see what is the big what side you are on thing is leading to.Looking forward to the next book.This is my honest and freely given review I did receive an ARC copy Fantastic start to a new Academy Reverse Harem series and I absolutely loved this story Haley finds out that her mother had secrets about her life she s a witch who had her powers bound when she was just a baby but worse of all she finds out that she is Lucifer s daughter and the princess of hell Haley is also engaged to her mother s cat who is actually one of her fated mates she meets the others when she is sent to Fortuna Conservatory instead of going to Harvard, a Hellcat, Hellhound, Warloc Fantastic start to a new Academy Reverse Harem series and I absolutely loved this story Haley finds out that her mother had secrets about her life she s a witch who had her powers bound when she was just a baby but worse of all she finds out that she is Lucifer s daughter and the princess of hell Haley is also engaged to her mother s cat who is actually one of her fated mates she meets the others when she is sent to Fortuna Conservatory instead of going to Harvard, a Hellcat, Hellhound, Warlock and a Vampire two are Haley s ex s from high school talk about getting thrown head first in a world that she didn t know or even believe that existed Fantastic story and I can t wait to get my hands on the next book and I highly recommend this book it s definitely well worth the read Hayley was all ready to graduate and head for Harvard but things don t go as planed She is tapped for Fortuna Academy a place where magical beings learn to control their powers and how to survive in society Hayley by the way, it turns out has had her powers hidden from her in hopes of being normal but when the people at Fortuna comes knocking their is nothing for her parents to do but give them back, is the daughter of Lucifer and Witch, Lilith has made a deal that a Hellcat names Keane be bet Hayley was all ready to graduate and head for Harvard but things don t go as planed She is tapped for Fortuna Academy a place where magical beings learn to control their powers and how to survive in society Hayley by the way, it turns out has had her powers hidden from her in hopes of being normal but when the people at Fortuna comes knocking their is nothing for her parents to do but give them back, is the daughter of Lucifer and Witch, Lilith has made a deal that a Hellcat names Keane be betrothed to her, but that is not all theres lotssurprises to come and I cant wait to readto this series *Free Kindle ↰ Fire and Brimstone ⇱ What exactly did dear old mum get up to before I was born I was supposed to be going to Harvard on a full ride I ve always been excellent at chemistry Turns out my knack for chemicals was because my mum is a witch and a potions master Did I mention she summoned a demon for a ritual and Lucifer himself came Can I tell you how weird it is to go from card carrying atheist to finding out Satan is your dad Harvard is out My magic was bound when I was a baby Apparently, now I m going to Fortuna Conservatory instead because once I m unbound, I can cause hell on earth Something about being the princess of HellI m engaged to be married to who I thought was my mother s cat and a boy from my high school I ve nicknamed Cockblocker Oh, he s actually a hellcat and I hate him I m trying to get out of it My high school ex is a hellhound and he s at Fortuna with me He s unusually interested in who my father is and would have known what I was when we were dating In fact, there are two hellhound leaders here that are just a little too interested in dear old dad I m woefully behind in everything since I was raised as human A green haired warlock has taken me under his wing to help me with magic A vampire tutor was arranged for me by the woman who foretold my birthAll the answers about me came in a vision to the hellcat s mother, Lilith She s the one moving pieces in the background She s arranging marriages, choosing my classes, and putting people in my path She s also avoiding giving us any answers Can I navigate a magical school when I have no training, not kill this hellcat I m engaged to, manage my crushes on the warlock and vampire, and still survive with two huge hellhounds sniffing around Something big is happening My birth wouldn t have been foretold if it wasn t I need to unlock all of my gifts as half angel half witch because whatever is going on, I ve only scratched the surface This is a fantastic start to promising new series Hayley s life is tossed upside down when she finds out she isn t going to Harvard as she wanted to, but the school she is going to is just the start of the revelations that will throw her into a strange new world I loved the new species and the unique natures of them all, especially as they interacted so closely The choice Hayley has ahead of her will be a hard one, though considering it s RH it may not be For me, it s no surprise that I ador This is a fantastic start to promising new series Hayley s life is tossed upside down when she finds out she isn t going to Harvard as she wanted to, but the school she is going to is just the start of the revelations that will throw her into a strange new world I loved the new species and the unique natures of them all, especially as they interacted so closely The choice Hayley has ahead of her will be a hard one, though considering it s RH it may not be For me, it s no surprise that I adored the nerdy vampire Of course, the other male leads could park their shoes under my bed anytime as well fictionally of course The end left me dying to start the next part This is first of hopefully many in the Fortuna Academy series Prepare yourself for this page turner you will not want to put it down Although the beginning felt a little rushed when your whole world is turned upside down, I really found myself getting into Fortuna Academy and all the characters she crosses path with Prophesies, hellcats, vampires, warlocks but wait there isLooking forward to unfoldingof the mysteries lurking around every corner of Fortuna.I received a free cop This is first of hopefully many in the Fortuna Academy series Prepare yourself for this page turner you will not want to put it down Although the beginning felt a little rushed when your whole world is turned upside down, I really found myself getting into Fortuna Academy and all the characters she crosses path with Prophesies, hellcats, vampires, warlocks but wait there isLooking forward to unfoldingof the mysteries lurking around every corner of Fortuna.I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review